this was a draft that i re-wrote :)

she looks at herself in the mirror. critically.

he waits for her at the corner.
somewhere far away a man dies in search of salvation.
but look at these two naive fools, how quickly they find what they seek.
they seek less.
they seek love.
they seek each other.
their young hearts burn with a feverish passion.
they believe in each other.
but they possess what the man never had.
hope.